It's always nice to see a change of pace in an artist.
Though the style is slightly different from your earlier works, there are still
remnants of your earlier designs. To me personally, I think your work have grown
closer to realism.
It's a good sign, when youâre taking new things into account without
discarding what already working.
Proportion wise, the girl with the blue eye appears to me to be the more
successful ones. However the hand from the yellow eyed girl on her neck creates
separation in between her body and her head. My eyes lead me to believe that her
head is larger than her body.
Now when you think you have understand the proportion system, you should see
more on how human body movement, to create real posture, as the yellow eyed girl
appears to be very misleading to me.
Perhaps planning the posture with stick figures might help you, and also looking
around for human activities, basically you need to see more on how the body
moves.
Good work on the shading, however to my personal taste, I prefer without filter.
I can probably understand why you chose to filtered it. To me it is important to
keep the pencil line clean at all time, donât worry to make mistake with
lines and always keep your pencil loose, donât stress it out.
Overall itâs a good work, keep it up. Next time it might pay to be much
more relax with your drawing, instead of following the formula create one from
your mind. Ok thatâs all for now, have to go back to the office n.n
.v.
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the first time that you simply cannot reproduce
That is deep, I personally like what you said.
Wish it can be captured or preserved somehow. Perhaps you did it within this
piece� (but only you know I guess)
To me this piece of work, is rather esoteric, it is quite hard, as an outsider
to fully grasp the intended idea within this piece of work. To me this work is
very personal to only yourself, it leaves little or no clues of what was
intended (or at least to me). And most importantly what it means to the artist
himself.
In term of composition it is rather unusual, as here I found myself searching
for something to focus on. All was laid bare and equal, I guess that was
intended from the 3 you have watched, like you said memento of the threes being
all equal, I guess that part makes sense.
As a fan of expressive paintings, I really like the color blend in between the
brown and the red, the textures from the wood grains added a nice touch to the
whole thing.
It has such intense emotion from it.
At a glance, I couldn't really guess whether the character was a male or a
female.
To me it has that ambiguous sense of both masculine and feminine qualities to
it. Not until I read through the description that it became clear to me as to
the reason why the character has such qualities. It feels to me the masculine
part of the character speaks of revenge while the feminine part speaks of being
loyal to the deceased husband. I personally think this idea is rather
interesting, I am not sure if this was intended.
The character intense expression really shows this tragic dilemma in my opinion,
I wonder if thereâs another possible way to avoid the use of generic
connotation (tears). Though I must say, although it is somewhat generic to my
liking, the execution of the intended expression is certainly flawless.
The calm and rather flat tones (in my opinion) really help to bring this idea
you were trying to illustrate. I feel that this color tones, have significant
impact in bringing the sorrow out of the character. It is simple and not
overpowering .
Overall interesting piece of work, I would have never thought to use an anime
character as a subject for a painting.
:*: well it deserved to be in Elite Gallery, btw did you scan this or
photographed it?
I see a lot of things have been improved.
From the proportion , shadowing , and this char has more style than those you've
drawn before .
It reminds me of Blue Mary form KOF in a way.
personally like the costume for this char looks good .
Shadowing is really nice too.
Nothing much to comment on ,but perhaps line weight will improve the drawing.
Like the outline , perhas play with different thickness of strokes all.
nice work i guess.
I like the grunge work on the bg.
Though i'm not entirely agree with the black strip on the top right corner, I
think it's a distraction for the grunge composition.
The caracther looks alright i guess.
Though i think it'll benefit from some more shadowing , refining the line
thickness will definitely bring more depth to it.
Well the psoture looks fine, could do a littlebit more refining.
Looks good.
Seems like someone been practicing hard
Like the improvements here.
It's a long way back from the last one.
Here i see improvements in the fold-lines in the clothings, shadowing, and
overall massing of the character.
It starting to show some depth and dimension to the character.
The stance looks convincing . though I'm not too sure with her right leg.
I feel that it is too closely drawn to the head.
I do like the expression on her face as well as her hair. It kinda work well
with the stance. The hair kinda helps explain what she's doing
Nice work overall and good job on taking difficult stance.
Keep it up
interesting characther.
reminds me a lot of your maple story characher in a way.
She looks simple.
could be more. get her a nice clothes etc.
I like the characther in this one.
just because it looks much more like a chibi characther.
as a chibi characther i think it has a nice propotion.
shading is defintely getting better.
nice to see improvement in the characther's looks.
it has gotten funkier since the last time.
the pose looks quite challenging, not sure if you have excuted it to the way you
wanted it to be. perhaps pay more attention on the folds on her legs, it'll give
more definition to where she stands , and the depth of the drawing.
my question is now, where does your characther stands among other styles?
Is it a chibi characther ? or something else?
This one prob the best one yet, from your original doujinshi.
I'm impressed with the stance you have chosen.
It adds a degree of difficulty to the drawing.
Well propotioned. *amazed*
the jean looks real 0_0 , the shoes need reworked though.
Overall nice work.
Keep it up.
Get better style for the fashion "
Overall awesome
nice concept.
really nice.
It has that cheesy moment kinda feeling
I like i tthough
I see this one has rather nice details.
AThough it's little but i think it's a start.
Adding a foldline on the clothes gives sense of dimension and creates more
interest for the characther.
Now try to develope the characther a bit more.
Adding bit more details here and there.
Give it a much stronger sense of individuality.
Again....same things needed to be looked much thorough as i said previously on
the other submissions.
nice work on the expression./
I think this one is the succesful ones out of the bunch.
The epxressions are really clear.
It helps to convey the concept.
Colring wise is okay.
Designwise it's cool.
Propotion wise prob need a tweak here and there.
But i think this one is better and improved.
after all chibis characthers still need a defined propotion.
Making chibis char is not an excuse to avoid the characther's propotion/or
figure.
this one is much more funkier.
I kinda like the stance.
it's challenging .
Proportion-wise i think this one is much more successful than the other one.
The guitar is really nice 0_0"
The 3d dimension of the chair could've been improved.
try drawing a cube with a figure.
i think it'll resolve the disfiguration.
The plain pale bg gives a unique blend to the composition, which i quite
like.
The char you've chosen is very interesting and charismatic in away.
My comment perhaps play aroun d more with the lineweights .
Nice bg.
Really like it.
Especailly the bubble effect with text inside , looks stylish!
Though i think KOn can use a lil bit of lines to define its shape.
Impressive.
Simplicity def brings out thebest from your desing.
Color choice is nice, it relates to the whole composition.
I really like the dotted lines, very tasteful in a sense.
Overall nice work.
Looks awesome on a cellphone IMO
It's always nice to see a change of pace in an artist.
Though the style is slightly different from your earlier works, there are still remnants of your earlier designs. To me personally, I think your work have grown closer to realism.
It's a good sign, when youâre taking new things into account without discarding what already working.
Proportion wise, the girl with the blue eye appears to me to be the more successful ones. However the hand from the yellow eyed girl on her neck creates separation in between her body and her head. My eyes lead me to believe that her head is larger than her body.
Now when you think you have understand the proportion system, you should see more on how human body movement, to create real posture, as the yellow eyed girl appears to be very misleading to me.
Perhaps planning the posture with stick figures might help you, and also looking around for human activities, basically you need to see more on how the body moves.
Good work on the shading, however to my personal taste, I prefer without filter. I can probably understand why you chose to filtered it. To me it is important to keep the pencil line clean at all time, donât worry to make mistake with lines and always keep your pencil loose, donât stress it out.
Overall itâs a good work, keep it up. Next time it might pay to be much more relax with your drawing, instead of following the formula create one from your mind. Ok thatâs all for now, have to go back to the office n.n .v.
Wow cool.
in a
way.
Professionally done
The editing is clean and crisp
And the guy looks a lot like jackie chan .
Nice work !
That is deep, I personally like what you said.
Wish it can be captured or preserved somehow. Perhaps you did it within this piece� (but only you know I guess)
To me this piece of work, is rather esoteric, it is quite hard, as an outsider to fully grasp the intended idea within this piece of work. To me this work is very personal to only yourself, it leaves little or no clues of what was intended (or at least to me). And most importantly what it means to the artist himself.
In term of composition it is rather unusual, as here I found myself searching for something to focus on. All was laid bare and equal, I guess that was intended from the 3 you have watched, like you said memento of the threes being all equal, I guess that part makes sense.
As a fan of expressive paintings, I really like the color blend in between the brown and the red, the textures from the wood grains added a nice touch to the whole thing.
Overall an interesting piece as usual
It has such intense emotion from it.
At a glance, I couldn't really guess whether the character was a male or a female.
To me it has that ambiguous sense of both masculine and feminine qualities to it. Not until I read through the description that it became clear to me as to the reason why the character has such qualities. It feels to me the masculine part of the character speaks of revenge while the feminine part speaks of being loyal to the deceased husband. I personally think this idea is rather interesting, I am not sure if this was intended.
The character intense expression really shows this tragic dilemma in my opinion, I wonder if thereâs another possible way to avoid the use of generic connotation (tears). Though I must say, although it is somewhat generic to my liking, the execution of the intended expression is certainly flawless.
The calm and rather flat tones (in my opinion) really help to bring this idea you were trying to illustrate. I feel that this color tones, have significant impact in bringing the sorrow out of the character. It is simple and not overpowering .
Overall interesting piece of work, I would have never thought to use an anime character as a subject for a painting.
:*: well it deserved to be in Elite Gallery, btw did you scan this or photographed it?
Wow nice.
What a nice surprise.
I see a lot of things have been improved.
From the proportion , shadowing , and this char has more style than those you've drawn before .
It reminds me of Blue Mary form KOF in a way.
personally like the costume for this char looks good .
Shadowing is really nice too.
Nothing much to comment on ,but perhaps line weight will improve the drawing.
Like the outline , perhas play with different thickness of strokes all.
Overall impressive
nice work i guess.
I like the grunge work on the bg.
Though i'm not entirely agree with the black strip on the top right corner, I think it's a distraction for the grunge composition.
The caracther looks alright i guess.
Though i think it'll benefit from some more shadowing , refining the line thickness will definitely bring more depth to it.
Well the psoture looks fine, could do a littlebit more refining.
But nonetheless a nice work.
Keep it up
Looks good.
Seems like someone been practicing hard
Like the improvements here.
It's a long way back from the last one.
Here i see improvements in the fold-lines in the clothings, shadowing, and overall massing of the character.
It starting to show some depth and dimension to the character.
The stance looks convincing . though I'm not too sure with her right leg.
I feel that it is too closely drawn to the head.
I do like the expression on her face as well as her hair. It kinda work well with the stance. The hair kinda helps explain what she's doing
Nice work overall and good job on taking difficult stance.
Keep it up
interesting characther.
reminds me a lot of your maple story characher in a way.
She looks simple.
could be more. get her a nice clothes etc.
I like the characther in this one.
just because it looks much more like a chibi characther.
as a chibi characther i think it has a nice propotion.
shading is defintely getting better.
overall nice work.
nice to see improvement in the characther's looks.
it has gotten funkier since the last time.
the pose looks quite challenging, not sure if you have excuted it to the way you wanted it to be. perhaps pay more attention on the folds on her legs, it'll give more definition to where she stands , and the depth of the drawing.
my question is now, where does your characther stands among other styles?
Is it a chibi characther ? or something else?
other than that good work.
Beautilfully done.
I really like the simplicity it gives.
Simple clean and expressive.
Like the style and the bunny design.
Really cool.
Nice work
Cool remake ona classic anime.
Now that you've kinda mastered basic vector.
Try finding a much difficult subject for your next vector project.
I'll look forward to your next work ^^
Impressie vector.
Not much to say really.
I really like the shadowing.
I think it's really cool/
I can't say much on this type of vector, as I don't ussually do this kind of vector,.
But i can see this work brimming with efforts and dedication.
Overall great work and efforts *salutes*
This one prob the best one yet, from your original doujinshi.
I'm impressed with the stance you have chosen.
It adds a degree of difficulty to the drawing.
Well propotioned. *amazed*
the jean looks real 0_0 , the shoes need reworked though.
Overall nice work.
"
Keep it up.
Get better style for the fashion
Overall awesome
wow very nice and impressive.
Like the vector work you must be very proud.
I like it.
Just one comment mayb the outlines need refinement, eg. thiner or evern better, try lineweight on it.
NOnetheless a surprise submission ^^
nice concept.
really nice.
It has that cheesy moment kinda feeling
I like i tthough
I see this one has rather nice details.
AThough it's little but i think it's a start.
Adding a foldline on the clothes gives sense of dimension and creates more interest for the characther.
Overall nice work.
Keep up the good work
I think u're getting better with coloring now.
Now try to develope the characther a bit more.
Adding bit more details here and there.
Give it a much stronger sense of individuality.
Again....same things needed to be looked much thorough as i said previously on the other submissions.
Nonetheless .
It's a nice improvements .
nice work on the expression./
I think this one is the succesful ones out of the bunch.
The epxressions are really clear.
It helps to convey the concept.
Colring wise is okay.
Designwise it's cool.
Propotion wise prob need a tweak here and there.
But i think this one is better and improved.
after all chibis characthers still need a defined propotion.
Making chibis char is not an excuse to avoid the characther's propotion/or figure.
nice work
rather cute i must say.
I like the coloring.
Very convincing.
The shadowin works well in my opinion.
though i'd really like to see improement more in the propotions.
More definition on the characther' bodies.
Other than that nice work and nice concept
this one is much more funkier.
I kinda like the stance.
it's challenging .
Proportion-wise i think this one is much more successful than the other one.
The guitar is really nice 0_0"
The 3d dimension of the chair could've been improved.
try drawing a cube with a figure.
i think it'll resolve the disfiguration.
Nonetheless , awesome effort.
Keep it up
who's this
"
Looks like Jill from RE ~>~
Shadowing is quite successful.
Though i strongly recommend creating a layout for the human figure before starting a new drawing.
A good effort, wish the clothes could be more .....fashionable
Nice try anyway 10/10 for trying it ourself
I like the looseness of it.
It's free.
the color reminds me of german's expresionism movement.
I'm liking the whole presentation
Nice work
Stunningly presented.
The plain pale bg gives a unique blend to the composition, which i quite like.
The char you've chosen is very interesting and charismatic in away.
My comment perhaps play aroun d more with the lineweights .
Overall nice wall. Awesome
Nice bg.
Really like it.
Especailly the bubble effect with text inside , looks stylish!
Though i think KOn can use a lil bit of lines to define its shape.
Nonetheless nice work.
Very nice.
Crips clean and WELL designed.
Impressive.
Simplicity def brings out thebest from your desing.
Color choice is nice, it relates to the whole composition.
I really like the dotted lines, very tasteful in a sense.
Overall nice work.
IMO
Looks awesome on a cellphone